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spring rain-
the traveller photographs
the marked sheep

Sangeet

ps I accidentally deleted the original Haiku which had some comments. Hope I've remembered it correctly!
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8 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like this one! :)

25 May 2006 at 03:36
Aurora said...

Well done!

25 May 2006 at 14:00
polona said...

i like this, too :)

25 May 2006 at 20:42
sangeet said...

Thanks Andrew, Aurora and Polona!

Sangeet

25 May 2006 at 21:26
Pat Paulk said...

Somehow I feel sorry for the sheep. Good 'ku!!

26 May 2006 at 12:56
sangeet said...

Thanks Pat!

13 June 2006 at 19:42
Shyam said...

Hello Sangeet, This is a lovely haiku. It evokes a subtle concern for the sheep and sabi (sadness) to think it may not even be anymore. You're invited to post at our website: www.wonderhaikuworlds.com

Best Wishes,
Shyam

23 July 2006 at 05:44
littlepurplecow said...

Such a great mix of emotions... I really like it.

15 November 2006 at 03:38

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