Wednesday, 24 May 2006
















spring rain-
the traveller photographs
the marked sheep

Sangeet

ps I accidentally deleted the original Haiku which had some comments. Hope I've remembered it correctly!

8 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like this one! :)

Aurora said...

Well done!

polona said...

i like this, too :)

sangeet said...

Thanks Andrew, Aurora and Polona!

Sangeet

Pat Paulk said...

Somehow I feel sorry for the sheep. Good 'ku!!

sangeet said...

Thanks Pat!

Shyam said...

Hello Sangeet, This is a lovely haiku. It evokes a subtle concern for the sheep and sabi (sadness) to think it may not even be anymore. You're invited to post at our website: www.wonderhaikuworlds.com

Best Wishes,
Shyam

littlepurplecow said...

Such a great mix of emotions... I really like it.