mother's day -
my 10 year old comes to the bedroom
scented soap, writing paper, bracelet
the look on his face
as I unwrap each gift
in her hand made card
all the colours of the rainbowand more...
my 8 year old
has wrapped his own presents:
a peace lily candle ...and handkerchiefs
three children -
discussing the merits
of each others gifts
hugging each child
So incredibly sweet are these that I was almost too lost in the message to notice how well you executed it. Such a good write, Sangeet.
lovely. i can't wait to have the joys of being a mother :)
Thanks all, your kind words are appreciated!
Very beautiful poem!!
sangeet, that is so sweet! thanks for sharing these intimate moments!
Thanks Pat, Polona and Cherie!
Ah, Aurora was right -- this is a fantastic series, Sangeet!
You must feel very proud of your family...and I know you savor every moment.
(The years pass so quickly...)
so touching ... made me cry, which i need every now and then.
very, very nice
Vis-a`-vis and Lary,
thank you for your warm words..
"in her hand made card
all the colours of the rainbow
this is my favorite -- I have many of these cards, too.
Andrew.. I have many of these cards too.. aren't they wonderful?
Thank you Denis! :)
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