Monday, May 15, 2006

whiteblossoms

summer-
his fingers scatter
the blossoms

Sangeet

6 Comments:

Jason Sanford Brown said...

Sangeet,

well done, empathetic and layered!

3:47 AM  
Pat Paulk said...

Sangeet, you've outdone yourself with this one!!

12:24 PM  
polona said...

great work indeed!

7:10 PM  
Christine Klocek-Lim said...

I like this one,too, because of the way the poem makes a statement about relationships without ever explicity saying that. Very well-layered.

1:26 PM  
floots said...

love this one

8:28 AM  
sangeet said...

Thanks Jason, Pat, Polona, Christine and Floots: glad it pleased..

Sangeet

5:22 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home