
summer-
his fingers scatter
the blossoms
Sangeet
This is my first Haiku blog (as opposed to web site) and its an attempt to start writing again... You can also visit my old website: Sangeet's Haiku and Poetry Corner now located on www.thehaikupoet.com
6 Comments:
Sangeet,
well done, empathetic and layered!
Sangeet, you've outdone yourself with this one!!
great work indeed!
I like this one,too, because of the way the poem makes a statement about relationships without ever explicity saying that. Very well-layered.
love this one
Thanks Jason, Pat, Polona, Christine and Floots: glad it pleased..
Sangeet
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