
spring rain-
the traveller photographs
the marked sheep
Sangeet
ps I accidentally deleted the original Haiku which had some comments. Hope I've remembered it correctly!
This is my first Haiku blog (as opposed to web site) and its an attempt to start writing again... You can also visit my old website: Sangeet's Haiku and Poetry Corner now located on www.thehaikupoet.com
8 Comments:
I really like this one! :)
Well done!
i like this, too :)
Thanks Andrew, Aurora and Polona!
Sangeet
Somehow I feel sorry for the sheep. Good 'ku!!
Thanks Pat!
Hello Sangeet, This is a lovely haiku. It evokes a subtle concern for the sheep and sabi (sadness) to think it may not even be anymore. You're invited to post at our website: www.wonderhaikuworlds.com
Best Wishes,
Shyam
Such a great mix of emotions... I really like it.
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