Wednesday, May 24, 2006

marked sheep

spring rain-
the traveller photographs
the marked sheep

Sangeet

ps I accidentally deleted the original Haiku which had some comments. Hope I've remembered it correctly!

8 Comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like this one! :)

3:36 AM  
Aurora Antonovic said...

Well done!

2:00 PM  
polona said...

i like this, too :)

8:42 PM  
sangeet said...

Thanks Andrew, Aurora and Polona!

Sangeet

9:26 PM  
Pat Paulk said...

Somehow I feel sorry for the sheep. Good 'ku!!

12:56 PM  
sangeet said...

Thanks Pat!

7:42 PM  
Shyam said...

Hello Sangeet, This is a lovely haiku. It evokes a subtle concern for the sheep and sabi (sadness) to think it may not even be anymore. You're invited to post at our website: www.wonderhaikuworlds.com

Best Wishes,
Shyam

5:44 AM  
littlepurplecow said...

Such a great mix of emotions... I really like it.

3:38 AM  

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