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spring rain -
after warning him off the cookies
I eat them
Sangeet :)
after warning him off the cookies
I eat them
Sangeet :)
posted by sangeet at 11:00 PM
Friday, March 24, 2006
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- Name: Sangeet
- Location: Wales, United Kingdom
I encountered my first Haiku about 20 years ago. However it was not until Dec 1995 that I was fortunate enough to find the Shiki Haiku Mailing List and this is where my real learning and writing began! ......more
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11 Comments:
very sweet ending!
This is so cute, Sangeet!
I've enjoyed your haiku very much.
(Thanks for dropping in to visit me --I've been away sick.)
:-)
Lary
I really like this one (and wish I had some cookies).:)
Very funny!
Sangeet - the haiku you are sharing with us that show bits from everyday life work so well because they feel so real - a Sylvester song has now popped into my head and won't stop playing 'You make me feel mighty real..' - sing it with me.... someone...
on a haiku anorak note this one again works well on one line without punctuation the cut is so clear as to perhaps not need the '-' after line one
i'm currently for no punctuation generally in haiku it could be just a phase but its been with me a while now years in fact
Little Onion
Thanks all!
It was a true to life moment unfortunately :^)
Little Onion, thanks for sharing your thoughts. This doesn't work for me as a one liner personally. I use punctuation (eg. - .. ) as kireji or caesura in some of my Haiku to deliberately create a pause, or to set the scene.
Punctuation discussions have been around in the Haiku sphere for so long that I personally feel you have to do what feels right for you. You're never going to please everyone :)
Sangeet
very nice... brought a smile on my face :)
Thank you Polona!
Sangeet
i think i'd do the same :)
and i agree with you on punctuation
excellent.
Thanks Ruthanne and Eric!
Sangeet
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